As for the poem, I first have to give props. It's not winning awards anytime soon, but it's not bad from a technical perspective in my amateur opinion.
It's a shit poem. There's no meter / metrical pattern whatsoever. I guess they don't teach iambic pentameter in Norway. All he does is break the lines so one will rhyme with the next. I'm surprised he didn't twist the text around to make it look like a sad-faced soccer ball.